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the world has shifted on its axis, so they say
"i would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, i would send other words to tell..." - richard wright
welcome readers & writers! in this cyber space please find: + a photo writing prompt + a place to post your creative writing response (poem, memoir, short story or the like) to the prompt + a community of readers and fellow writers excited to read your writing + morsels of genuine fiction, poetry & creative non-fiction as the blog is updated. share a response as often as you'd like. everyday discoveries from my life, captured on film, will serve as prompts. this is not a place where we will critique one another's work; however, words of encouragement or praise for writers who share their work are most welcome. writers, share your story, poem or creative non-fiction response to the photo by clicking on comments; word count is flexible. cheers! demery
That's an extraordinary poem. Thanks so much for sharing it during these troubling times.
ReplyDeleteYour poem gave me goosebumps. Sad, and yet so beautiful, and ending on that note of hope. I love it.
ReplyDeleteWe had meant to go on a day out, me and my family. We had meant to drive down one of those roads you never see cars on, stop somewhere, and just have a picnic. But after we had heard about Japan, and then about all our friends over there who had been hurt, all the shine went out of the sun. My cousin who is in the navy was there when it happened. He is going to have to do a lot of work now. Our friends the Greens, were there and they lost power, though they are safe. and many other friends and relatives of ours have been affected. There was no day out that day. we just sat, did school and graded papers, and prayed. It's really hard to understand how there can be so much suffering in the world.
ReplyDeleteBut the thing we all need to remember as we make out way through this is that there is good in the world too. So let us all offer our prayers to those who have been hurt by this disaster, both directly and indirectly.
Beautiful poem, Dem. Hugs.
ReplyDeleteTricia & Linda - Thank you both so much. It means a lot to me to read your kind words.
ReplyDeleteChuck - I love your choice to use the line from Robert Frost... It's entrance there at the end is a cooling balm on the anger and despair (so powerfully expressed) I know so many of us feel when tragedy strikes. Thank you for writing with me.
Johnsons - I love this description of your day and your family's thoughtfulness. Not only is it a glimpse into the lovely people you all are, it is well written and nicely polished. I love to read your work! Thank you for writing with me.
Alison - Thanks, and hugs to you my friend.
all the souls of the dead lifted up at once in a great heaving sigh heard round the world . . . and those left behind felt the breath of it on our cheeks, moistly.
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